You buried your head in my chest
Would it be more appropriate and more poetic to say
You buried your face in my chest
I wonder...
LYRICS
ENGLISH
Translated by TV-Rocker [Source]
"I was dreaming," you said.
With hoarse voice, at silent dawn.
You buried your head in my chest.
Your sigh silently spilled over and fell out.
While I was dozing off,
with my both arms,
I was drawing your actual warmth closer to myself.
Like seeking the continuation of your own dream,
your eyes are swaying without any sound.
While I was dozing off,
with my both arms,
I was drawing your actual warmth closer to myself,
gently...
Soft sunlight is playful beside windows.
It seems like this moment now is a faraway dream.
Sorrowful, and kindful.
While I was dozing off,
with my both arms,
I was drawing your actual warmth closer to myself.
"Let us have a dream in this morning,
to be able to follow our memories all along, throughout..."
1 comments:
Thanks a lot for introducing my translation in your blog!
And now I have to mention posting comments in my blog.
As you pointed out, the verification of my blog requires only Japanese characters.
(Actually, I haven't known that my blog has such a limited service before. I wish I could communicate all over the world in my blog...(T_T))
And, about this line:
You buried your head/face in my chest
I think you're right, and "face" is better.
I just have a poor skill of English, so when I write something in English, I'm relying on Japanese-English dictionary on internet. I can understand their meanings, but I can't understand their nuances.
I'd like to ask you my translation more naturally in English.
Finally, I admire your enthusiasm for Masha. And I feel very delightful that many foreign people love Masha.
Now I'm really happy to be able to find out such a good blog!
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